Comments of chapter undefined of A Samurai in Twilight
A Samurai in Twilight
fake_lion
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No hate but I think you have worked yourself into a corner and you are just trying to explain your way out of it. Like no issues i like the story but you have spent the past few chapters just trying to explain your decisions which really interupts the flow of the story. I think it would of been better if you had just made him ask out tanya and it didn’t work then just kinda left him there without doing anything with the other girls. Cause also with alice who I’m assuming is going to be the soulmate and future partner you don’t want to see your ”mate” as you have described it in that kind of relationship with someone else.
problem with this is the mate thing. As soon as you suggested the Alice mate angle, you took away any options. Now everyone knows Paul only has physical relationships and normal adult ones but will be forced to be with Alice cause of the mate angle. You ended any other outcome by doing this . If you were smarter, you'd have make it so no women has any mate plot with the mc and just let the mc wing it and explore his options 🤦♂️
fake_lion:I think you misunderstood, stories with relationships and stuff have dramas like that and explanations, I already said that the MC stayed with Irina to give an option to the readers, if the majority wanted the MC to stay with Irina, it would be like this so that they didn't fall in love and were just together. What happened in the last few chapters, is that the Cullens were trying to understand what was happening to help Alice, I found it interesting to do this to involve the other characters in the story, in addition to showing what their personalities are in my fanfic. since the MC won't be with Irina anymore, he goes to Forks in the future and they won't see each other until something happens that involves the Volturi if it does.
