I appreciate the work you put into this novel. Most especially the country you picked to showcase the fantasy. I look forward to reading more interesting and intriguing chapters. Hope Dad finally learns martial arts đ„
In future story, I think there should be more stuff like immortality, cultivation, magic, martial arts dungeons and labyrinths, different races(Elves, Demons, etc.), Gods and Goddesses, different realms and worlds, civilizations, mythology etc.
I like the plot. Continue your original plot of the story putting some changes bec of some readers suggestion could sometimes affected the plots. I will follow whatever the authors imaginative scene in this novel. Love this. đđ€