I_am_Creator
It is focusing a little too much on that terrible princess, but even with necessary strife, I would like to see that Garrison is keeping an eye on things secretly and has started to uncover Madeline's vicious acts and spreading rumors. Hopefully he will start protecting his inl-lawsand stopping Madeline from making moves on Ana and using Rowan.
The story is still ok but seems to run around in circles with nothing beneficial to the lead female. She came back with no plan forward except to deal with matters of the family instead of dealing with enemies. It stretches a little but the story is good. Aside from her grudges I would have liked to see her making a lot more positive changes.