Comments of chapter undefined of Miracle Card Shop: All My Cards Can Be Actualize

better start than the gf just completely betraying him gotta admit

Much better start than the cliche girlfriend betrays MC for someone of higher status fanfic.

a great but sad start. will he come back and kill them all?

I would hope that his girlfriend would go with him or something sense she didnt know that all of this was going to happen!

So? Reason why the prince did that?

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Good story so far. Not tropey. Grabs your interest. You need an editor though, the grammar is pretty bad. Wrong tenses & run on sentences.

Honestly a terrible start in my opinion. But let’s see where I goes

Starting with cruel dead eh

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it's okay than the other cliche who betrayed the MC completely.

Well author have ntr fetish so i will drop this. Why a author write something his girlfirend raping from a prens.

Me gustó lo llevó a una trampa pero eso no era su intención es muy bueno no como los otros dónde lo traicionan jaja, gracias por el capítulo suerte en tu vida