An_Ineloquent_Pen
Hello, it's one of the new novels and i like it. The story is original and take his time, something who is really rare and so precious.I hope you will get chosen to go premium even though i prefer free novels (nothing is perfect).Good luck and i wish you "bonne chance" (good luck in french as it's my native language).
I think you novel is amazing. Give time and will grow more popular. BTW I like your style, is different and fresh, Very entertaining and instructive. Keep going the good work. Don't change your essence for what others say. Keep true to yourself and many good things will came to your way, Even when things becomes difficult and hard .
Nah, I'm going to be real with you slow and detailed stories is not the issue. Plenty of slow stories that do very well. Its more has to do with the content of the said slow-paced story. For 28 chapters not much has happened. Just because it's slow pace doesn't mean stuff doesn't happen. my money is on that it's the mc that is holding you back not your writing style, though even for slow-paced stories there is a limit to how much you could derail the story from the purpose at hand. As for the mc while he has gotten somewhat better, in the first few chapters if someone told me they dropped because of the mc I would get it. As for your story so far I like it and see myself continuing to read.
hahahha It continues quite well, my only wish is that the main character does not realize his situation for a long time and is always secretly shy and still does not understand his position even though this situation repeats over and over again. Apart from these, it is going well and I will watch it until the end, I hope it ends without any unique and repetitive events, I support you my friend. [img=coins][img=golden ticket]