What message are you trying to convey in this book. At the moment the ideas seem infantile . A book about a loser becoming worser than their bullies, adding wish fulfillment as well. Narcissistic , arrogant are not Mc characteristics .
MC must be logical and smart , if he exposes his magic , he'd be closer to meeting a dragon . He would already have enough problems with he master swordsman talent.
'I will look handsome no matter what I wear anyway.....sigh.... if this goes on, I will really become a full blown narcissist.....well there isn't anything wrong in being one.'
mc just said he didn't need attention because a dragon might come after him but now because harem and being a showoff it doesn't matter. Stop making your Mc idiots because they are cautious .
One of the dumbest decisions I have read, right after someone is deemed a top talent , he wants to step on them. There has to be some type of heavy consequence for the stupidity.