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Comments of chapter undefined of Enchanting Melodies (HP SI)

SavvyDragon
SavvyDragonLv14SavvyDragon

I like this divergence from canon while still being believable, absolutely love how you’ve portrayed Tom Riddle, still can’t figure out what he’s going to do

Carnic_321
Carnic_321Lv4Carnic_321

tftc honestly Harry should have never gotten involved with Riddle especially after he hid himself from his arcane hearing or after he met him in Lockharts room he’s drawing trouble to himself for basically no reason especially since Riddle doesn’t want anyone dead the worst case would be that someone is abducted but even then he knows where the entrance is

Supreme_Leader
Supreme_LeaderLv12Supreme_Leader

I understand that you want to stage a confrontation between Harry and Tom and don't want to make it too easy for Harry. But honestly there are so many things he could have done but it feels like Harry is looking at all his options........From the first day he knew the Map was very useful but he didn't even try looking for it. While the Map should be with the twina he should have at least tried searching for it in Fich's office and maybe tried "borrowing" it from thrle twins. The twins also tend to explore the castle, he could have followed them and knocked them out taken the map from them. They'd definitely have it with them when exploring......Moreover he is only relying on magical means completely forgetting about clever muggle things. Like he could use things like, tear gas, the ink that banks use to mark Robbers, wire trips, explosives, flashbangs. When it comes to life and death he should not have any stone unturned. But all summer all he did was procrastinate. Then when he came to Hogwarts he could have rigged the bathroom with dung bombs or inks to mark Tom, but instead he only used magical means that could easily be detected by Tom. He could have done so many things, more so because he is portrayed as being more intelligent than his previous life.

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I feel like you're overcomplicating things and you're overinflating Riddle's competency. There's a reason why Horcruxes are such stupid things to use for immortality, it saps you of rationality, and here you're giving a mere sliver of a soul some genius level intelligence and extreme competence.

Verethragna74
Verethragna74Lv2Verethragna74

This plot is garbage. You are providing Tom abillities that are impossible for him to have.

Daoist932064
Daoist932064Lv2Daoist932064

Thanks for the chapter

Dical
DicalLv11Dical

Thanks for the chapter

Kishore_Dhar
Kishore_DharLv2Kishore_Dhar

Thanks for the chapter

Wasad
WasadLv5Wasad

Thanks for the chapter.

Zobemaru_II
Zobemaru_IILv1Zobemaru_II

Очередная хорошая задумка в фанфике. И в очередной раз история идёт куда-то не туда. Жаль

AvidReader962
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Tibbles
TibblesLv15Tibbles

He can just change the enterance?

Ballad
BalladLv5Ballad

People don't understand that under everything happening Harry is having fun. He's enjoying the Chase game with riddle and he hasn't even realized it.

PrimalWhiteStar
PrimalWhiteStarLv4PrimalWhiteStar

Thanks for the Chapter... hope he won't become an Edgy protagonist...

Ash_born01
Ash_born01Lv14Ash_born01

great chapter eagerly waiting for the next chapter