Comments of chapter undefined of Enchanting Melodies (HP SI)

Honestly punishment didn’t fit the ‘crime’… for being rude and self-defence?! for a second I thought (and hoped) that he won’t go in, and that expulsion threat is empty. He definitely should lose any respect for McGonagall and Hagrid for this 💩, because it is ridiculous. Since he went in and going to be in extreme danger, he should contact appropriate authorities after it is all over… school endanger his life, this should be logical thing to do for an adult (in mind) like him… oh an a comment like “what is this?! Some 💩 book for kids?!” would be amusing 😆 also Filch is really stupid isn’t he? Literally every single person in that school can hurt (or worst) him, and he is still all ‘gangsta’?! 😂

I love it, but you keep force him into cannon its boring, i hope those chapters with the weird hermione friendship and this illogical reason to go in front of voldemort would leed to somewere. Its really annoying, punished for defend himself wut?

so he is afraid of learning from quirrell but has no proble to go into the murdering forest to fight vampire quirrel after he kills multiple unicorns every night for seven nights in a row? come on man drop cannon already.

He should contact the Daily Prophet and tell them about everything.

I have to say that you narrated the unicorn part so well that for a moment I wanted to grab Tom by the neck, pick him up and leave him there until he stopped moving, good chapter, I look forward to the next one.

this is soooooooo boring now

forced plot device go brrrr

Voldemort be like:

omg, author....

Talk about forced plot... Nothing about it makes sense.

It keeps losing quality, I really don't expect anything more from this story, all my expectations died.

Ok, now this is just getting ridiculous

Harry should give the letter to someone on the Hogwarts board. Or even Malfoy's father about the fact that someone involved with dragons smuggling was given charge of children and his decision was to take them to the forbidden forest. This entire event shows bad decision-making on every level. In Canon, what would Hagrid honestly do if the children were attacked. It took a while before Hagrid was able to come to Harry so shooting red sparks going to be that helpful. All he could ever do is physically intercept any danger, but hopefully only one that might attack the children. Harry should have written down every time Longbottom or the weasel bothered him. As well as which teacher he informed of the issue and the response. When you have every single incident dated and time as well the response of the teacher involved, it becomes more real of the failure of the teachers and the institution. If he complains about it, and there is no record Eve on his own that he can show sounds more like a child.

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter

thank you for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter.