Comments of chapter undefined of Enchanting Melodies (HP SI)

this so far has been the best written opening part of a harry potter fanfic. its not overwhelming with details and infodumps but its also not so fast paced that is has no substance. the only critisism would be the personality of the mc or the lack of. But the writing style and the pace are just soo good that it still the best opening of any harry potter fanfic i read. Please continue writing this and thank you for the story.

You do realize that Ollivander family is the one to create the first ever wand since 382 bc way before Rome, it even says it on his work shop, Creator of fine wands since 382 bc

En verdad Gran Bretaña es la única que usa varitas. El Gobierno Magico como mucho, ya que en las otras zonas del mundo la varita no se utiliza o se utiliza muy poco. En mi opinión un mago sin varita que aprendió en Hogwarts es inútil. Por lo tanto me gustaría que pudiera utilizar magia sin la varita y mucho mejor.

As usual, 90% of useless information and 10% of something actually happening.

Thanks for the update

i like the ambition of the mc

thx for the chapter!

Thank you for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter

Nice goal

Ty :)

Thanks for the chapter. By the way, why hasn't he gone to the Room yet? Surely that could help him with further studies?

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter

Now that he is learning aritmancy, you could introduce some of the characteristics of the spells like their speed, their range and other thing like that. I always wondered that if a mage could stretch the space between himself and his enemies he could be almost untouchable since spells should have a limited range determined by the quantity of magic that you use (my theory)

This is my favourite fic