7inkz_etls
I'm a bit lost reading them but good thing my mind was creative enough to imagine what was going on. Feedback: You write at a fast pace and your description is nicely written but watch out for some readers who don't have wild imaginations. Also, this was the first time I read too many prologues. Suggestion for your next novel: Try to write one prologue that could already hook up the readers. The rest of it could be along the story which could be shown up through dreams, or flashbacks or could be a deja vu kind of thing. I hope this comment will help you ^^