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Comments of chapter undefined of My Lust Booster System

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Julie_Alegre
Julie_AlegreLv13Julie_Alegre

Don't take to heart my comments . If I am not good in imagination in reading . Your story is bit scattered point of view . Maybe you can give some hint which part the reality, the flashbacks and the imagination . Hope my comments can help you

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MistIris
MistIrisLv10MistIris

I'm a bit lost reading them but good thing my mind was creative enough to imagine what was going on. Feedback: You write at a fast pace and your description is nicely written but watch out for some readers who don't have wild imaginations. Also, this was the first time I read too many prologues. Suggestion for your next novel: Try to write one prologue that could already hook up the readers. The rest of it could be along the story which could be shown up through dreams, or flashbacks or could be a deja vu kind of thing. I hope this comment will help you ^^

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Nickjr321
Nickjr321Lv14Nickjr321

Thanks for the chap

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Riley_23
Riley_23Lv2Riley_23

His daughter is angry. lol Is she a tsundere?

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Ink_Quanta
Ink_QuantaLv12Ink_Quanta

What's happening....I don't understand....who's in the pot?

Iradukunda_Bonheur
Iradukunda_BonheurLv1Iradukunda_Bonheur

Incubus, am d’allonges for subuccus