Comments of chapter undefined of Strongest Nova: Path of Vengeance

Since you requested it, I’ll leave feedback. In my opinion, Stanley’s actions after his mom died were dumb. I understand everyone processes grief differently, but he finally obtained powers, got the life long job he wanted, and then left when a couple of people died. Now he seems to be killing or some to terms with killing easily (tentatively based on this chapter.) Also, the mayor saving his life hasnt been addressed yet. It was stated multiple defenders were injured during the crawler attacks and the mayor couldn’t heal them all, yet Stanley, a powerless weakling at the time, was saved? Further, he killed his brother who had far more value than Stanley since it wasn’t worth the effort? That also doesn’t make sense to me. Again though, I know it’s still unraveling so I’m waiting to see if we will get answers. Lastly, I think the reason the book isn’t getting much traction is due to how new it is. It is beyond frustrating to read a good story just for it to get dropped a couple hundred chapters in. Many people like to wait for them to reach a few hundred before committing, myself included. I picked this one up because I was bored but find it entertaining. Overall, the only real problem I had was Stanley’s actions when his mom died as they didn’t make sense to me. The rest is still a mystery as the story is still new. I think you should keep going with it. I do believe it has the potential to be very popular with what you have created so far.