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The description and everything are good but I don't understand a single thing since i started reading
DaoistLORD_PARAGON:What's the power system like? What's happening in the world because one of the girls kept saying she wants yo go outside but it is dangerous What's the name of the kingdom /city they are currently in. How's the mc special apart from reincarnation And they are too many perspective, if you don't give us snippet of information ,most people will forget where you said this or that