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Comments of chapter undefined of I Farm Demons : Unholy Necromancer In the Apocalypse

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KjellTheViking
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Just a bit of constructive criticism, but you gotta work on expressing your ideas about the story. You keep repeating the same thing over and over again, but with different words. I don't need to read 3 times about how Destiny Day is super important for everyone cause it determines their future. I got that the first time. It gets frustrating for the reader when in every chapter you repeat the same information in 3 different ways. 1, it makes it seem like you're trying to use filler to make the story more robust. 2, it can also make it seem like you're treating the readers like we're idiots.

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Kenneth_Mceuen_0675
Kenneth_Mceuen_0675Lv14Kenneth_Mceuen_0675

Thanks for the chapter.

CHAOS_FOOLISH
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Mr_HonestReview
Mr_HonestReviewLv3Mr_HonestReview

1 whole chapter that only tells how ready he is.

Yonaas
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