BLACKangelmarl
pace is a bit fast, chapters are short, economy and price of soul coins is absurd.I mean so many things to buy, and also he can put a lot more things as rewards, not just from the system but the loot from killed people.Still even after that, to buy anything, he has to kill thousands of people for their soul coins.......Dude only put up a single cultivation book, and he already spend thousands of soul coins!And need more varieties, on the same floors. Why is their only goblins and wolves? Put a few more species, like spiders, snakes, armordillos, kobolds, raptors, eagles, owls, vultures, falcons, harpies, bugs, insects, bees and small water biomes, treasured fishes, eels. Make it HUUUUUUUUGE!The st floor of any good dungeon is the preview of the rest of the floors, it is to welcome all the newcomers!To show, prepare, and teach them about what to expect in the future!What is a dungeon, if it's not huge, with puzzles, mazes, teams, loots, potions, skills, techniques, dramas ( love, back stabbing, sacrifice, proposing), tomb raidings, etc etc...?Then plots, for different factions,different sub plots inside each factions, different inter faction plot- sub plots for multiple factions or inside them...So in essence, you can explore a lot, but the main issue is, your pace is too fast, and chapters are too small.