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Comments of chapter undefined of I Created A Dungeon In A Cultivation World

Oran_Keenehan
Oran_KeenehanLv4Oran_Keenehan

Great pace

Aman_Shaikh_9232
Aman_Shaikh_9232Lv4Aman_Shaikh_9232

i don't think that the pace of the novel is slow

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Hirak_Barua
Hirak_BaruaLv15Hirak_Barua

pace is a bit fast, chapters are short, economy and price of soul coins is absurd.I mean so many things to buy, and also he can put a lot more things as rewards, not just from the system but the loot from killed people.Still even after that, to buy anything, he has to kill thousands of people for their soul coins.......Dude only put up a single cultivation book, and he already spend thousands of soul coins!And need more varieties, on the same floors. Why is their only goblins and wolves? Put a few more species, like spiders, snakes, armordillos, kobolds, raptors, eagles, owls, vultures, falcons, harpies, bugs, insects, bees and small water biomes, treasured fishes, eels. Make it HUUUUUUUUGE!The st floor of any good dungeon is the preview of the rest of the floors, it is to welcome all the newcomers!To show, prepare, and teach them about what to expect in the future!What is a dungeon, if it's not huge, with puzzles, mazes, teams, loots, potions, skills, techniques, dramas ( love, back stabbing, sacrifice, proposing), tomb raidings, etc etc...?Then plots, for different factions,different sub plots inside each factions, different inter faction plot- sub plots for multiple factions or inside them...So in essence, you can explore a lot, but the main issue is, your pace is too fast, and chapters are too small.

Requiem_Phantom
Requiem_PhantomLv15Requiem_Phantom

Definitely not slow, a little fast but I think it is fine right now.

ZtaDyd
ZtaDydLv4ZtaDyd

it's ok but the chapters are very short

Space_kook
Space_kookLv15Space_kook

You passing it quite well

Kogmere_27
Kogmere_27Lv4Kogmere_27

fine pace

MONARCH_OF_DEATH_
MONARCH_OF_DEATH_Lv4MONARCH_OF_DEATH_

nope it's perfect