Great start to a story

Great pace

Where dod you get inspiration

I Like it

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Ya it is fast paced. thanks for chap ter

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Great novel….,,,,,,,,,’’’’’’’’’’’’'’’’’’’’’’’'’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’'’’’’’//////‘/‘/‘’/‘/‘/‘/‘’:’:’’:’:’:’’:’:’:’:’’:’:’’:’:’:’’:’:’:’’::’’:’:’:’:’’:

Is he an antagonist

The only problem i can see is Ye Mo’s appearance is not described

👍🤩 story is progressing well

When did this book start

Be nice if there was a fami that was as strong as Alexs , he builds up this forces and they fight

Too many a names

I like what i see

I love this very unique

AMaZing

I like what im seeing keep up the good work

Other then that its an amazing story

Ya i dont like where the story is going from here it would be nice if it was a war with people called the sovereign candidates and they fight to rule over the universe, there is no Gods and stiff bs