Comments of chapter undefined of Hogwarts: I'm Really Not The Dark Lord

Continue he is not a pawn but a master of his own destiny, the premise of the story is intriguing, and well thought out, do not pay attention to these comments, but a couple peices of advice, don't make the harem too big (max of 3 or 4) as it will lose the good effect of romance, and maybe an editor once the story progresses, as I'm sure it will.... I good luck and I look forward to your future updates, gambate