CORNBRINGER
Thanks for a chapter! This one was a bit clunky tho I get it that you want to go for cannon faster, but this was not a story chapter that looks good imo. Thing escalate too fast, it’s like you started conflict with Ivan and ended it in two words. You basically tell what’s happened instead of showing it, that’s what I don’t like imo. Also you didnt explain how can he learn hoho and hakuda and lido. I can get zanjutsu, coz his sword can tell Adam how to use him the best. No explanation why sword spirit knows all of these kido spells. It’s like there was a training arc without training. And the last but not least. If Adam is strong enough to take down Brain, why isn’t he searching for Tower? He knows Rob is still alive probably, did he just forgor this place exists? Feels kinda strange. I guess if he had 1 year of time he could find it already. Invite makarov or gildarts to join and clean this place, save rob and Ezra. Still really good story, take my power stones