This fic is omega good Liking the concept and powers of mc Keep it up

HURRAAAAY PRAISE THE AUTHOR AND WELCOME BACK! WE MISSED YOU

Thanks for a chapter! This one was a bit clunky tho I get it that you want to go for cannon faster, but this was not a story chapter that looks good imo. Thing escalate too fast, it’s like you started conflict with Ivan and ended it in two words. You basically tell what’s happened instead of showing it, that’s what I don’t like imo. Also you didnt explain how can he learn hoho and hakuda and lido. I can get zanjutsu, coz his sword can tell Adam how to use him the best. No explanation why sword spirit knows all of these kido spells. It’s like there was a training arc without training. And the last but not least. If Adam is strong enough to take down Brain, why isn’t he searching for Tower? He knows Rob is still alive probably, did he just forgor this place exists? Feels kinda strange. I guess if he had 1 year of time he could find it already. Invite makarov or gildarts to join and clean this place, save rob and Ezra. Still really good story, take my power stones

It’s Darkseiding tiiiime!

KILL THEM AAAAAAL

He won’t come back the same as he was anyway I guess hes character is growing up both in strength and mature ways

If that’s so, then why doesn’t he use them more often? MC did use use powers twice (if I remember correctly) in this fic. The first time when he was a child and second vs joker in death/death situation. And back in that time his voice was even less powerful cause he didn’t mature. Also I believe superman could hear his whisper as it was a explosion

I thought hes whisper was enough to destroy the whole street and that’s why he doesn’t speak. Like he never uses he’s voice because it will destroy everything around him, but here he just talks and only Harley is barely damaged

I say you kill everyone and it looks like they disappear to Evilus. Ishtar would never know. How can a group of I few new lvl 3 and 2 kill a larger group with lvl 4 close to 5? Not happening. At least kill Toad, Ishtar familia prob has no other strong guys so you win when it comes to war game