Comments of chapter undefined of Demon Slayer : The exploits of the Evolving demon

you stretch things out way too much and tend to repeat yourself using different words each time. just say what needs to be said and then move on so it doesn't take 10 chapters just to say "i went in and saw that her parents are scum that don't deserve her, and they just tried to sell their daughter to a slave trader" or "she was abused so bad that she lost the ability to express her emotions, or sealed her heart away behind a wall of stone so she could protect herself, and in the process lost the life in her eyes."

Thx for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter

thanks

Love da chap!

TFTC