TheManCandy
It is unsatisfactory how the MC is constantly about to die, or in similar situations without rest for the reader. Honestly, reading this makes me as a reader feel that the MC is just an weak ïdiöt which simply does not get stronger since he receives brutal beatings in each fight which is honestly pathetic in my opinion, I repeat, the development of the MC is unsatisfactory, you can say that the Rex is very strong, and I know, but you can't face them in their first fight in the dungeon, also the description of the fight is very rigid as if the MC let himself be hit, no sense of doom, just simple punches that the MC doesn't dodge