Comments of chapter undefined of Eclipse Lovegood The Rise of the dark sun

Eclipse Lovegood The Rise of the dark sun

overlord9000

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Anonny_AnonymousLv1Anonny_Anonymous

I highly recommend you run this story through Grammarly or spellcheck. Look at your first paragraph. It’s a mess, quite frankly. Every new sentence needs to end with punctuation. Each new sentence needs to start with a capital letter.

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overlord9000Authoroverlord9000

I do plan to fully edit it with Grammarly but I'm planning to do it after I have written a number of chapters and at least it's readable at the moment. I have slightly edited it since I first released the chapters because before people could not read it as it was like a block of writing thank you for reading my story hope other than my gramma and punctuation you enjoy the story

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SEEKERLv14SEEKER

adios it has cultivatiom

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TijolinBrLv2TijolinBr

The story sounds interesting but your grammar and punctuation are horrible. No offense, but offense already, I think you should try to learn this before putting the story on patreon

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The_Chosen_HalfLv4The_Chosen_Half

I suggest you make a new paragraph whenever someone talk cause it will cause a lot of confusion

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