Hatake_Rhino
good story so far.... pace is also good... no need for that quick mastery bull***t and 10 year old fighting garp đ đ just a suggestion instead of going for every beast in anime verse just pokemon is sufficient you can also make him have a goal to start the great trainer age you spread pokemon across the world of one piece that'll be great story to read but if you already have plot in your head then go for it... My idea was just giving you a purpose for mc... âď¸âď¸