Comments of chapter undefined of GOT/ASOIAF: Son of the Unworthy

mc girls belongs to mc only there virginity belongs to him mc is the only one to claim his sister I truly hope the mc claims her and taints her in his color

it going good so far

The pov changes are not well handled, this ruins the whole immersion. I would suggest you to make your texts more fluid because once he is talking normally then he talks to himself and sometimes i am confused as to who is talking and sometimes it's just really rough to read, so yeah pay attention to that.

Thanks for the chapter

is his superhuman vitality part of his bloodline that his descendents will inherit ?

Trash abilities.

Fun start

I thank you for the chapter.

Thanks for chapter

thanks for the chapter

Thxs for the chap

Ty

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The vitality can be good or mid depending on what you think it involved, the music parts can honestly be a good hobby, the last one tho... It's only good if you're already the best weapon master or have prodigious skills or endless talents, it's simply a way to never get debuffed, or at least the original version was, maybe you went in the (never degrade) way where his technique can never become worse so if he practice long enough he will become the best at some point

TFTC…

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