Comments of chapter undefined of Omniversal Trade Center
Omniversal Trade Center
Student_Of_Culture
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Gabichu_YeahLv3Gabichu_Yeah
The worst chapter in fact, acts recklessly, also behaves immaturely throwing a tantrum against a fictional character, gives away powers left and right (s1mp) and his clumsy speech is very uncomfortable to read, I know there are people who act like this but it is a minority, I wish the MC spoke like a normal person or at least reacted like a normal person
Student_Of_CultureAuthorStudent_Of_Culture
Just say you don't know how normal people interact as well. I was an idiot expecting some useful criticism from you.
Gabichu_Yeah:You go out and interact with people in your day to day, right? Compare those people and your MC, you will have the answer easily xd
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