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Comments of chapter undefined of Omniversal Trade Center

Gabichu_Yeah
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The worst chapter in fact, acts recklessly, also behaves immaturely throwing a tantrum against a fictional character, gives away powers left and right (s1mp) and his clumsy speech is very uncomfortable to read, I know there are people who act like this but it is a minority, I wish the MC spoke like a normal person or at least reacted like a normal person

Student_Of_Culture
Student_Of_CultureAuthorStudent_Of_Culture

MC was a Orphan, Virgin Shut in, as explained in the first chapter. So obviously he wouldn't be very good at talking to people. He would simp a little for one of his favourite waifu. And can you tell what's bad about the speaking and reaction? I will try to improve it.

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OverkillBills
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Thx

Student_Of_Culture
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King Slime

Student_Of_Culture
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Eater Of Worlds

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Glassgow

Student_Of_Culture
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Sutherland

ErozothDraeor
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It started a good novel, but since he got the start kit, aka those dragon scales, the price of everything is never mentioned, basically a blank cheque to buy anything.

Wachdog
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thanks for the chapter, it shows a human mc with emotions and what the game and trust do, and its consequences, only more customers are missing