Good chapter, but you are sitting too much on the MC, look at the environment where he is, not marvel per se, but the hospital for example, bring life to the world around him, new movies have not
This is kinda awesome so far.
Though there are quite a lot of gramma errors. And im not the biggest fan of the Present Tense being used with less than stellar grammar.
But still enjoyable nonetheless.
This is great. This guy has the likeness of a great terrarian. I love that game and it is probably my most played game of all time and I can feel its spirit in this fic.
