Comments of chapter undefined of Yggdrasil’s Developer

Chapters need be longer. This one especially was quite short with nothing in it really. All of chapter nothing but filler till name of game. To jjst have 1 single important thing is filler and useless tbh and most wont even stay if its a constant throughout

Sheeesh~ talk about having the passion to do things. Wish I have one of those

thanks for the chapter 👍

The whole story so far is nothing but back and forth within MC's mind which just preaches about everything. Auther uses big words and fancy sentence structures but at end it doesn't mean anything to the story at all. He doesn't want to live in virtual world and escape reality as he says in the first chapter then he wants to work so he can make "difference" by helping everyone escape reality. Literally landed job to escape poverty and thinking like he has mang options and only doing this for the good of humanity! I'll suggest Author to write 5-10 chapters then read them together to improve story further.

Interesting story so far😊🍵

Thanks for the chapter

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Thanks for the chapters.