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Comments of chapter undefined of Getting a Technology System in Modern Day

LG1
LG1Lv15LG1

why i cant vote on the novel?

adam_redleaf
adam_redleafLv14adam_redleaf

I feel that this should either be the last chapter before the fighting starts or the next chapters will be either slice-of-life or someone else's perspective or some of both. Maybe Esparia's leaders and the people funding them, or maybe Aron and Rina go on a date in the simulation to catch her up on his plans and develop that relationship

Brendon_Drouant
Brendon_DrouantLv15Brendon_Drouant

Time for Esparia to suffer a series of unfortunate events 😈

AADucxter_42069
AADucxter_42069Lv5AADucxter_42069

and the way you describe the place and the building, its hard to imagine,thats why i am having a hard time imaging the place of his army, i hope you get what i mean

AADucxter_42069
AADucxter_42069Lv5AADucxter_42069

i am going to say this, you and exlor(the auhor of mech touch), are very good with the details and little stuff, but i hate to say this, the world bulding of your novel is not good, i dont feel aron with his soldier its like the way they are written feels off, but the technology side, MEN YOU WERE CRAZY, but the world building, even i dont feel the accomplishment of aron establishing a military (i mean the feeling)

BE_SAFE_ALL
BE_SAFE_ALLLv6BE_SAFE_ALL

Thanks for the chap [img=exp]

SoBored
SoBoredLv15SoBored

Thanks for the chap