Agent_047
I feel that this should either be the last chapter before the fighting starts or the next chapters will be either slice-of-life or someone else's perspective or some of both. Maybe Esparia's leaders and the people funding them, or maybe Aron and Rina go on a date in the simulation to catch her up on his plans and develop that relationship
i am going to say this, you and exlor(the auhor of mech touch), are very good with the details and little stuff, but i hate to say this, the world bulding of your novel is not good, i dont feel aron with his soldier its like the way they are written feels off, but the technology side, MEN YOU WERE CRAZY, but the world building, even i dont feel the accomplishment of aron establishing a military (i mean the feeling)