Comments of chapter undefined of No More Pain For This Villain.

I hope mc won't marry her at the end and find someone better as the story goes but please no harem

why mary POV ? focus on mc and ignore this mary she already rejected him the mc should man up and move on i think mary mother is good choice, and please make this novel a harem,

well what can i say is still hate her

i like the way you reveal the past of important Characters and how it affects to their present self this early as because only few authors will do this move. Keep up the good work man I took a liking to this series.🙏👌😏

Really good depth to the characters :0

Is this flashback 8 chapters!? Wrote 4 chapters of story and then 8 chapters of backstory on the girl that turned him down?

I like the storyline, the character depth, and the designs so far. Maybe it's just me, but I prefer paragraphs in stories like these to have more complex and descriptive sentences for a wider variation, and also more detailed vocabulary. Like instead of, 'my mother crying while holding me' you could say, 'my mother's rigid breath as she sobbed, her trembling arms wrapped gently around me'. Idk, this is just my opinion, I've never tried posting web novels so idk if this would take up too much time or smthn 😅

MC just forget about her. LOL, its not a ticket pass to hurt others just because of you tragic backstory. burn girl

Thank you kindly for the chapter 😁I am getting the feel that this story is a bit of a slow burn which really kinda damages the popularity of a story that gets locked chapters by Chapter 14 in my opinion...😅🤔

Great chapter

great job author