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DaoistZFzgGj

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  • DaoistZFzgGj
    DaoistZFzgGj4mth
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    don't you mean ten years

    Alan's eyes showed a trace of disdain. This Rex was already twenty-five or six years old at first glance, five or six years older than Aaron, and only a fourth-level Silver Knight, bah! Shame!
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    Starting Life as a Baron
    Fantasy · ShamsX
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    Achilles

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    i think this story should have more of villians protagonist to be honest if i was him i would have done everything to kill any creature i saw definitely not to search for mother that definitely will use me for her own agenda and like she abandoned him i dont care what her excuse it . like i understand the little girl rachel and whatever the class president name better towards why will they make their choices then again this story is obviously is inspired by the isekai where the protagonist got thrown in dungeon so we will see

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  • DaoistZFzgGj
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    very good really . the only problems i have is the pace may really hurt the story in the future and characters other then the main character aren't complex enough

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    I Have A Villain System!
    Eastern · MrNobodhy
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  • DaoistZFzgGj
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    man you don't need to overexplain every little thing you were just talking about the lore for 18 chapters straight

    This was due to everyone being used to seeing good-looking faces every day, and felt a fresh breath of air, when they saw a below-average-looking person, which they don't normally see, like they were rare animals in the wild.
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    How to Tame Your Demi-Girl
    Fantasy · AGodAmongMen
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    no his brain is like zombie level dead

    [The canines are still in storage. Don't be stupid. Is your brain even working? If it's still alive then use it to leave here with money]
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    Lucifer system: Becoming the Devil in an Apocalypse
    Fantasy · SoulSnatcher
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    i wish this story have strong revenge theme for the world government

    Ch 2 Fuck you, Rufus
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    Lucifer system: Becoming the Devil in an Apocalypse
    Fantasy · SoulSnatcher
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  • DaoistZFzgGj
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    nice first chapter i especially liked tge transition of character perspective and talke

    Ch 1 Chapter 1: Rebirth.
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    The Beautiful Nine-tailed Fox relies on me
    Fantasy · DaoistfriendSR
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  • DaoistZFzgGj
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    very great abd good written story so far

    Ah, my memories from Earth. To me, that is like looking at a movie of another person as we are too different. I feel no connection or resonance with the Arthur of Earth. I am just Arthur the man who seeks to slay the Gods.
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    Slaughter the Gods
    Fantasy · Requiem_Phantom
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  • DaoistZFzgGj
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    good descion

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    I Regenerate 10,000 Times Faster
    Fantasy · RagingArtPunk
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  • DaoistZFzgGj
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    you shoot defenceless woman honor is least of your concern really

    "Woah there!" Kyle exclaimed defensively, looking around at the gathering crowd behind him as he adjusted his tie, "That was a fair election! I would never stoop to underhanded tactics!"
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    Surviving the Apocalypse With My Three SSS Rank Wives
    Fantasy · One_Winged_Angel
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  • DaoistZFzgGj
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    they all horrible people even if the author try to justify them the author should make the main character punish them somehow .

    "They all swore until the last breath; the accuracy is undeniable." Serenity countered, "I've gone to four other settlements; each account was the same: 
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    Surviving the Apocalypse With My Three SSS Rank Wives
    Fantasy · One_Winged_Angel
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  • DaoistZFzgGj
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    is not this ability useless really

    ╔══The Target's Ability [Blessed by the Heavens] is immune to the effects of Soul Thief.══╝
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    Surviving the Apocalypse With My Three SSS Rank Wives
    Fantasy · One_Winged_Angel
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  • DaoistZFzgGj
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    again the police man just want to save his skin . and he doesn't mind blaming a person even if he is just victim

    The female detective looked at me like I was the victim and the male detective looked at me like I was the culprit.
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    I Became the Demon King of Lust
    Fantasy · DXHaseoXD
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  • DaoistZFzgGj
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    how could he one he was the one being bullied it is like skinny girl suddenly able to fight and kill her 6 rapist it does make sense to even being suspicious of him and it is clear he will come under the bus that was the intension of the police man

    Ling Yue looked at Xia Tian with narrowed eyes before saying, "Is this all that your justice is worth?"
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    I Became the Demon King of Lust
    Fantasy · DXHaseoXD
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  • DaoistZFzgGj
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    yeah so basically you have created new story i am sure in the future you will basically never even mention it

    In fact my memories about the old domain seem to be fading slowly . I dont remember anything clearly. Its as if the beacon of memories of that past seems to be going further away and away from me diminishing everything along with it.
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    Astral Domination
    Fantasy · sanssyyy
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  • DaoistZFzgGj
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    i am really not sure if i like the new story ( yes basically it is new story at least i wish it will have faster pace )

    #mind alter might have seemed op but it was because the mind control was already beyond 60% and hence he could use the touch suggestions , if from the very start ruth used have the skill for 'sex with me' ,  the skill wouldn't have worked  . i am just trying to keep things progressing at decent pace while keeping them balanced.
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    Astral Domination
    Fantasy · sanssyyy
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  • DaoistZFzgGj
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    one of the best novels in the website. the characters are amazing the language is clear and while the writer don't revlionate the whole world building about cultivation novels ( at least until now ) he still tries to keep real interpretations of such society and it is consequences though the writer seems quite obvious Marxist and the story is developing very beautifully to say the least maybe it is better on the side of the heroine more than the main character but it is sacrificed I am ready to pay .keep the good work author it is genuinely great story.

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    A Villain's Way of Taming Heroines
    Fantasy · POWER_
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  • DaoistZFzgGj
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    what did it say

    "Among them, Hydral is the most special, they are not born with the awakening of the spirit, but ▇▇▇▇"
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    A Villain's Way of Taming Heroines
    Fantasy · POWER_
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  • DaoistZFzgGj
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    the writer continue to change the protagonist from becoming a person who take over the body and then to person who merged with the original soul like he says he visit the royal palace and then he says that the original soul loved this person man just choose something

    I thought as I entered an empty corridor. Having spent most of my childhood playing in the Royal Castle proved useful since I took various shortcuts to the royal garden.
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    Saga of Atlantis
    Fantasy · Noob6_writer9
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