Comments of chapter undefined of No More Pain For This Villain.

Bro said he killed his whole family and all his friends but jasmine and his parents didn't have to die😂😂

the first chapter does not seem like a book but rather a fantasy of greatness that a teenager has in his mind

The storytelling is awful... The author was trying to make it cool and dark, but it just sounded like some 13 year old kids cringe thoughts.

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Great chapter

after adding a " please make the first letter capital

A glorious death indeed 👑👑

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The first chapter is like a story written by a 13 years old in wattpad.

The cringefest is over 9000. Author tries to hard to be edgy, instead comes as a cringe. There is no logic. Just like a previous member said, the edge lord kill that guy family, friends, associates , neigbours,dogs, yet he asks why the maffia boss killed edge lord family in return. Dafuq? Author, do you actualy read what you write? And this is just chapter one, and it gave me cringe shivers

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