Moziel
Wow so you killed them off just like that. What a waste of good developed characters Like why waste so much building for magik, Change John's personality and interfere with his fate just to kill them off like dogs on the side of the street. You didn't even give them a chance to react or even a pov of their death and how they felt. They just simply died, You literally wasted me time with them. Why let me get attached if you knew that they'll be killed like trash. Why make them seem important when truthfully they are not at all. Especially Magik, You built her up since chapter 1 and killed her off just like that
But that's the thing. This isn't reality, it's a book. I can't see what's going on, I can't hear what's going on. I can only read. That's why I need to know how their death was like, what was going on in their mind and only person capable of doing that is the author because it's only him/her/etc that's knows how it was like in their head/imagination. Let me give you an example, If you watched harry potter. Imagine when Draco killed Dumbledore we didn't see any expression from neither draco nor Dumbledore nor Snape nor Harry. Imagine if it was just a cutscene and next thing Dumbledore is dead. It would have been sooo terrible 😂
Eaebeleza:Everyone has their own thoughts, but reality does not forgive.
I hope he gets a sample of his old DNA (from a hair or something) so he can replicate his old mutant ability by modifying his DNA. If he can’t get his old DNA, he should find a better mutant ability and copy it. Perhaps David Haller’s or someone else with reality warping powers. No need to settle for force fields. Right now, even with amped psionic power, he’s still weaker than Phoenix. And it appears his force fields were useless against a strong enough psychic. If he wants to get in the big leagues, he needs reality warping.
So recap for those who do not understood mc gets his body destroyed and his soul transmigrate to another body , now the green light that enter was his psionics powers( the power of the alien crystal and the another ball of power was the goblin force, now what does it mean? It means the story really starts now , with his powers enchanted by the phoenix and now his cheat per se ( we could say he either evoke it with his emotions and will or that this was his original cheat because psionics was a sould thing and bioshield a Gene thing , but now goblin force full power) now the Mc learned where he is in the food chain really and where he really is , because before you could tell that he made a lot of mistakes, but now with this chapter it chances everything new body means new or improved mutant ability ( i was thinking of sylar from heroes , the series ability or the person who has golden body and can regenerate even if he has only a tiny cell he survived galactus i think) as well as he is a singularity( person who exist only in the present and only in the dimention that resides in) how could we forget that goblin force covers andrew or Michael ( Honestly i prefer Dante as his new Name , like Dante Prime or something along the lines) to those who peek the future , for those who died he could later revive them when he fully master the goblin force ( he will train very Hard and he will have to consume to evolve ) Now Andrews body is incinerated by phoenix fire that means that the New of his death will be public and nobody will be looking from him( except maybe phoenix but i do not think so ) This means without followers without nobody that holds him back to consume evolve and train but is lonely this road so he could search for a pair of powerfull people , who may or may not be in sokovia ( wink wink ) who does not like a speedster in his team ? And a powerfull sexy , yandere witch that will come you across the multiverse And then bam alien tech available for you as well as infinito stone as the time of the invasión is nearbut first you have to kill siniestro So i reccomend a training arc now for him , then kill siniestro absorb snd consume all of him and his knowledge and then go for apocolypse do the same and then the invasión, and if you can find the way to make ultron your jarvis
Ugh author you just restarted the whole fic. Hope this time he acts smarts and not start fighting openly untill he is planet level atleast. Seriously he just has to wait and power booster options will come across his way. I mean if he can manipulate his genes he could try copying powers of franklin richards(only reality manipulator with no possible drawbacks) take extrimus serum , super sentry serum. And his original plan of mind stone(tho he may need a proper container to avoid detection) and something that allows cosmic energy manipulation(maybe try gaining blood of captain marvel)
DId author just reboot his novel with this 2 chapters? Im so done with mutan movie doing reboot now we have to deal with it in novels too? 😩 It wont fair for me to judge so early but i've read many novels where authors try to do this and never have i read a single novel where it works out the way they want. Id just consider this an ending where mc died and his soul left marvel world to place unknow. bye y'll
Isso foi muito triste, eu realmente esperava que a Fênix os trouxesse de volta, é bom que Andrew agora tenha muito mais poder psionico e aparentemente ele deve ter a habilidade de reencarnar sua alma em novos receptáculos mas ainda assim a perda de seu grupo é devastadora Espero que isso o ensine a não ser tão arrogante, ele está em um mundo muito perigoso, mas é realmente muito triste se apegar a esses personagens que pareciam ter futuro apenas para eles morrerem de repente, eu acho que se fosse apenas um deles não seria tão chocante Mas como ele agora é mais poderoso talvez ele tenha os meios de reviver seu pessoal no futuro, claro que vai ter que ter um planejamento cuidadoso quanto a isso mas enfim