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Comments of chapter undefined of The Alpha: Claiming His Enemy's Daughter

DaoistBvBZLx
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i think thers's a book that have the dame exact plot but had differents character name. It called the Alpha King's Hated Slave by Kiss Liani. the plot was very similar, only the character had different name

Ericka_Huete
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Like I've said before, the characters need a break. We as readers need a break as well. This should be light reading. Instead, it's turning out to be worse than Greek tragedy!!! We need a break. This book should be romantic, fun, adventurous, and exciting. Unfortunately, so far, it's just been tragedies after tragedies. If one more of my favorite chatacter dies, hence (Ethan). I am taking a much needed break from reading it.

Lady_Venom
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Where is Rie? Why has he kept himself alive for hundreds of years with black magic? Who was Iris's real mother? How did she die? Was Gerald Iris's real father? How did Iris's mother even end up with him? Why was Iris born deaf? Why is Na's essence inside her? What is the end goal? When will Aria be able to find her peace? Why is Dexter obsessed with her?

Lady_Venom
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If Na's essence is in Iris's body then why can't she do more for our girl? Rather than suppressing memories, why not save the babies?!!!! Why was Iris not strong from the start? Why did it take so long for her to uncover her powers and yet, it's still not enough?!!

Kathy_Gurganus
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Thanks for the chapters!! I know this story is very heavy but so is life... I had a really hard time getting through those first few chapters & I still dislike Cane for what he did to Iris but I've seen alot of growth with our beloved characters & I'll continue to cheer them all on from here!!

Daoist7ut6YQ
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Come on Iris! Heal Ethan 😢

Leda_Oliveira
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Rei =Decratic

Nina_Madriaga_2875
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the chapters became shorter and brief ..what is this I didnt read it for at least 5 minutes..oh god this writer is very selfish..just I want to remind you author that the chapters was paid nd not for free.this is not worth the price..heck.

kinjal_jesani
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another short n useless chapter

Lady_Venom
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Lady_Venom
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Was the map that led to the church where the five swords rested lost or destroyed? After all Decratic has followers on that continent as well. Who's to say this wasn't planned out to keep the next Serafim weak? Also, how did Cyan's curse reach baby Rora? Don't you need a hair strand? Or something? Or did Dexratic do that?

Lady_Venom
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Sad, sad story. I want to cry. I want to scream. What is this?

Lady_Venom
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How long will this book be?

Melinda_Bautista
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Suffering, Dieing, What more is coming! Aaahhhhaaaa!

Leda_Oliveira
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Iris, salve Ethan!

Rockst3ady
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See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

Leda_Oliveira
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Será que Rir e Decract são a mesma pessoa?

Leda_Oliveira
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Decratic infundiu magia negra em Iris.

Lady_Venom
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