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Comments of chapter undefined of Bleach: Innate Control

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Mp_Gaming
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You should upload more frequently

Red_Roman
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🤷🏾‍♂️

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Leylin_Farlier99
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thanks for the chapter man and tye new style, well I would say tye old one is better, as the pov here changes too much, so it breaks the immersion. of course it's up to you whether you wanna continue to write in new or old style.

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_VIIX_
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The style is different alright. And not to be rude this kinda writing suits a light novel more than a Webnovel. The multiple PoV's are welcome there but here readers want the flow. And multiple PoVs break the flow. So, if you are practicing in this novel to actually publish your original work someday, I'd say keep up this style. But if you're serious about the success of this story first and foremost, then the previous style matches it more in my opinion.

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MagicSand
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Thanks for the chapter Wish you well author Keep up the good work

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Jin_Kazaragi
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Merci pour le chapitre !

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JarOfOz
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Thanks for the chapter!

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Leitor_Onisciente
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Barragan was easily defeated by Aizen. But I don't think the power levels between the two were great at that time. So I still find it difficult to guess the true level of barragan, Kyoka Suigetsu is too broken.

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ThiccThighs
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Thx for chap

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SekaiForLife
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Thanks for another great chapter, I look forward to future chapters as well.

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Angledark
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Good Chapter

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SultanOfSleep
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thanks for the chapter

Kingelano1
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Another one bite the dust

Granville4554
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Just caught up binge reading thanks for the chapters 🙏 🙂 ☺ 🙃 🙌

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Inugami_Black
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Gracias por el capĂ­tulo

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jasss22
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Thanks for the chapter

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Ppq_Dewa
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HaremHater10
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I wonder if theres gonna be a time skip(the cannon) till aizen

carefreeshadow
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dropped?

NicolasDC
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gracias por el capĂ­tulo hombre

Master_of_Loli
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arrancar looks downbadlly weak because 1. they only have 1/10 of their power(unless they want to use released form right on the bat) 2. they really really unmotivated to kill shinigami in huecomundo arc and fake karakura town arc, imagine if they attack like Vasto lorde ichigo, any captain level shinigami gonna get smoked.3. kubo really hold back captain death until twby arc