Red_Roman
The style is different alright. And not to be rude this kinda writing suits a light novel more than a Webnovel. The multiple PoV's are welcome there but here readers want the flow. And multiple PoVs break the flow. So, if you are practicing in this novel to actually publish your original work someday, I'd say keep up this style. But if you're serious about the success of this story first and foremost, then the previous style matches it more in my opinion.
arrancar looks downbadlly weak because 1. they only have 1/10 of their power(unless they want to use released form right on the bat) 2. they really really unmotivated to kill shinigami in huecomundo arc and fake karakura town arc, imagine if they attack like Vasto lorde ichigo, any captain level shinigami gonna get smoked.3. kubo really hold back captain death until twby arc