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Comments of chapter undefined of Yamoshi Peverell (H.P. Fanfic)

Yamoshi Peverell (H.P. Fanfic)

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LordSatan666
LordSatan666Lv13LordSatan666

the status at the bottom needs to be fixed but overall good chapter one thing though is try not to fluff your chapters with the status all the time like if there's major changes sure but overusing it can take away from the story

1yr
The_Square_Squad
The_Square_SquadAuthorThe_Square_Squad

Yeah your right. I fixed it in a few chapters but it's hard to keep track of it. I'm going to start only showing certain parts of the status when mentioned in later chapters.

1yr
RaijinGod
RaijinGodLv11RaijinGod

Luna Lovegood for fl pls, really hoping for this bro 😭. Keep up the good work and thanks for the chapter. 😁👍

1yr
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ROBtheBOB
ROBtheBOBLv5ROBtheBOB

dude he will be a lord by then off a pureblood family he would be protected by all the laws in favour purebloods. so it makes no sense for him to change/hide his name

1yr
JohnnyK
JohnnyKLv4JohnnyK

Is There A Harem

1yr
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