take some of the comedy out of it and hopefully he only grabs the best women for him not just a. a girl who was unfaithful to her previous boyfriend or that she is already used since she is fantasy and she is the MC for unless the majority are virgins and don't catch any prostitutes.
Excuse me but if you want this novel to be successful i suggest you should stop his shameless joke too much what i mean is you know the way hetalk an act too much will brag your novel to the ground