If you read so many novel, you will understand me.

It is waste time for me. I think that's the reason why it is not popular until now. It's boring and not funny to read.

Yah, that's the point. The author should lessen the foreplay.

It's getting boring. The r 18 seen is boring for me.

The Cultivation of Shi Yu is 6th stage of the Foundation Realm, While Chen Feng is 9th Stage of the Qi Gathering Realm. Why She did not kill him?. Dumb Author creating a Plot hole. She can save the women in the last chapter if she kill chen feng.

And Fix the Wrong Grammar.

Agree, the author ruined his work.

Wang Ming said she easily dogged his attack????? It should be he. And Change Order in Stages.

She? Tf, it should be he, hayz

Like this, he wanted, it should be "you wanted" fix the Grammar.

Please check the Grammar, Fix it.

Yeah, too much drama

Rewrite this novel, this novel have a potential but it's repetitive. Too much drama, unnecessarily plot, and i think you should focus about the Cultivation of the girls.

I think you should rewrite your novel, your novel has a potential, but it's repetitive.

You should add drama in the genre. Too much drama, and the word is to long and repetitive.

I hate this plot, is like a Chinese novel

The mc is powerful but he did not use it. Kill them that's all.

Hayz, im tired of it. Can you just kill him and done. So many dramas.

Worst

The story is good, but the Grammar is bad, please fix it.