Comments of chapter undefined of I Am The Game's Villain
I Am The Game's Villain
NihilRuler
Chapter comments23
I feel like the Protagonist's lack emotional IQ hope he will have some Character development Other than that good story keep it up!
I get the author said to give the character a chance because there is going to be character growth, but as a writer, you need to know that even if the character has flaws, there also needs to be some level of likeability for the audience to give that chance in the first place and so far the MC is completely unlikable.I think I'll try this story again later. There are still plenty of chapters, so hopefully, it gets better. And even though I don't like the MC, you should have some praise for being able to make your readers feel something because a lot of stories just have completely bland characters that promote no reaction from the audience.
gosh, this MC is quite frustrating, the way he acts, the way he behaves and the way he thinks is just too forced and fake. the conversation between him and this jarvis is even more useless as it is just about MC acting haughty and arrogant both in actions and words.MC doesnt feel like a proper human character at all. its like MC is just there to make the story run. everything about MC is forced to fit the story even if his thoughts and actions are so full of randomness that doesnt go with the current scenario within the sentences.
