Comments of chapter undefined of I Am The Game's Villain

wow this feels like total rubbish, it's going to be the first time I haven't read at least 20 chapters, what's more I won't go past 2..... it's so bad that this surprised me

I still don't understand why he acted like that towards her brother🤔

so if I am correct his gf is in game Or something? And He have to bring her back or live in that game

quite disappointing

Ohhh…there is 69 comments let’s ruin it hahah.

Oof, the grammar was making this hard to read. The half of the punctuation seems to have been put in just for laughs, many words are incorrectly used but are similar to the intended one so I can let that one slide, and the author should have added bits of information to clarify certain aspects. Even with all that, it can still be a good novel but I will probably drop it if the plot is bad. Those flaws are an annoyance on their own and are pretty minor IF the story itself is good. If the story drop in quality but the grammar doesn't improve then I will probably write a bad review and vice versa.

mid

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