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Comments of chapter undefined of Erotic RPG: I am in the Game world, But My Heroines are Villainesses

Reza2000
Reza2000Lv11Reza2000

Its contradicting, you said they are fuse together, why is he not bothered by his father dead, callius sad right??????

Taida_Naeko
Taida_NaekoLv1Taida_Naeko

I am disappointed in you. Renouncing the only bond that showed care for him and also didn't show even the slightest bit of respect for him... Really low.

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NamingSucks
NamingSucksLv6NamingSucks

The plot is promising, but if you keep remembering the "ntr" aspect of the original body of the MC, it could make readers here of Webnovel to drop your novel... even if the MC doesn't care about his 'fiance' it would still make the readers want to drop this story

Hakkira
HakkiraLv14Hakkira

Very worried that you are already making plot holes in 1 single chapter...😱Either the egos merged and became one person or they didn't and the MC is only affected by his previous life memories!

Lemon_Pope
Lemon_PopeLv15Lemon_Pope

Thanks for the chappy

user123_4
user123_4Lv4user123_4

solid start . can't say much since this kind of start isn't that creative or original, but it sure seems promising for sure , it all depends when the main plotline starts

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Axel_Garcia_3681
Axel_Garcia_3681Lv13Axel_Garcia_3681

Gracias por el capítulo

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Kayden_Duhaney
Kayden_DuhaneyLv15Kayden_Duhaney

Yet another good chapter

ImpishWolf
ImpishWolfLv3ImpishWolf

It looked promising, but meh, writing isn't that good. Lots of grammar error, hard to read. This Aron dude taking in every thing too easily, no emotional reaction whatsoever, things are just happening and he is just explaining, hard to enjoy. The fact that it's already been rewritten and still this bad makes it sad. 🙁

Ronan_McCrossan
Ronan_McCrossanLv13Ronan_McCrossan

If he doesn't care about his connections... good or bad... why doesn't he simply renounce it all? If he leaves the Augustride Family, that annoying Marriage will cancel itself. Unless the System is keeping him from cutting up his Social Security and going off Grid... He ought to. Don't let your fate be dictated by nonsense.

DaoisttMEhqf
DaoisttMEhqfLv1DaoisttMEhqf

I’m really liking the character and how they’re being developed

DaoisttMEhqf
DaoisttMEhqfLv1DaoisttMEhqf

I’m really liking how the character is being developed in this story

Alex_XD
Alex_XDLv3Alex_XD

Bien al demonio con todos los demás el ara lo que quiera jajaja

kjxudvc
kjxudvcLv13kjxudvc

❤❤