The MC brain has problem. He always disdainful towards enemy surrendering. But his purpose is to have more people joining him and always say he has the bigger fist

What happen tu his unique abilities absorption?

Isnt he spirit gathering?

You drag too much without explaining anything. Some mystery is okay but if every single thing is mystery i dont feel excited about the story because i cant even imagine what will happen(Fun about reading is you imagine what choice the character will make). Even thought it may not happen. The pace is slow, For example, a few chapter about a single thing which you can explain in a few paragraph. Making it hard for me to process what is it that is trying to be conveyed, especially for non native english speaker like me

Im okay he is not treating amelia as ria. But at least try more effort to make him like his family. Like as new family not like replacing his past family.

Trash, i only read a dozen chapter but the system is really limiting him, he only get few kill point but the price 9f the item is so high. Before rebirth he can reach half saint in his twenty. With this progress, i dont think he can reach it. For example he need 10.000 kill point to level from level 1 to level 2 qi stabilization realm. He only get 20 point for killing qi stabilization. Why can he cultivate normally i think he will progress faster

Also he receive too small kill points, only around 20, how lany must he kill to collet 10000. He must kill 500 qi stabilazatipn beast

Wow, 23 years old half saint realm, he need 2 monts to increase 1 level in qi stabilization realm.

Too many abilities

I cant understand wurst ability and his value?

The MC is so dumb, he can evolve so many things with no limitation but he didnt do it, rather he wait for strong opponent. He has so many subordinate but he only evolve her harem, what a dimb MC

I dont like the mc, even though the enemy is his future enemy, you cant just kill people in broad daylight in front of everyone. He kill people without thingking the consequence at least kill the enemy in discreet

Author please explain, i cant follow the story, i thougt outside mean above ground of the trial, but its outside world

Its fine for many secret but too many secret make us reader hard to follow the story

Thats how i feel as well, author said they fused together, then author said callius feeling didnt affect him then feel somthing about his mother

Its contradicting, you said they are fuse together, why is he not bothered by his father dead, callius sad right??????

Yessss, im like who cares about those character, i always feel that when rrading transmigration story

Fuxx, this story is so frustating i read about 700 chapter but her progress always restart from zero 4 to 5 times. She is alreasy hundred years old but she cant beat a teeneger because her sealed power (happen dozens times

From 230-340, 100 chapter fight with mc only appear in 30-40 chapter. Author even if you want to flesh the story this isnt it

Too many useless side character fight and the mc is not participate in it. So many chapter without an increase in mc strenght making it a bit boring for me personally