Comments of chapter undefined of HP: First Light

Hey author can i give you suggestions/ ideas for this novel , also i love the novel so far

I just started reading still in prologue, and it seems really good. The pacing is nice not slow burn. I just hope he doesn't become too strong very quickly. An idea, it would be better for mc to have 1 thing that he's really powerful at, like a plasma spell, or a specific element, thst he can use as trump card. And then for a few years after, bring his power levels up, until he's in year 6/7 or preferably even out of Hogwarts, where he can take down the 2 lords. I'm just sayin this, because it really kills the story if a 15 yr old bodies voldermort or Dumbledore. But thats just my ideas. Anyways I'll read more and see how story flows

Ty :)

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