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Comments of chapter undefined of Alexander Black's Magical Journey

CreepingDarkness
CreepingDarknessLv14CreepingDarkness

You may want to keep your perspective consistent. Jumping between third person and first person at the drop of a hat may irritate or confuse people.

Imperialist
ImperialistLv14Imperialist

to new beginnings, looking forward to this new series

DRACONIAN619
DRACONIAN619Lv13DRACONIAN619

thanks again and the really great chapter and I hope that tonks is one of the mc's girlfriends. because she had a raw deal

oab
oabLv4oab

I don’t think homosexuality works like that… 🤔🤦🏼 Wouldn’t that make him bi? Or he was gay from the beginning, and not because of ‘trauma’? 🤔

SYIHAAKIRA
SYIHAAKIRALv13SYIHAAKIRA

I enjoying it and thank you. I hope you rewrite alexander prince because i love that book.

Travis_Btmb
Travis_BtmbLv13Travis_Btmb

Thanks for the chapter

DaoistWQHNW3
DaoistWQHNW3Lv13DaoistWQHNW3

is this a DxD crossover?

Lucky_Rob
Lucky_RobLv2Lucky_Rob

Kuoh Japan? DXD?

MUSSIC_L0VER
MUSSIC_L0VERLv4MUSSIC_L0VER

good

Heir_of_slytherin
Heir_of_slytherinLv1Heir_of_slytherin

"Sebastiam tão original", agora falando sério qual e o problema no mordomo ter un nome normal? Não e como se apenas as pessoas chamadas Sebastian e Alfred pudessem ser mordomos