Comments of chapter undefined of I Became A Psychotic Demon god In My Banned Novel!
I Became A Psychotic Demon god In My Banned Novel!
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The first two chapters are lacking.It's not bad but it sure isn't good either.Author, I think you should try to rewrite them.Cons of these chapters:- The Mc hasn't been presented ( identity & morality)- The chapters are confusing( nothing is explained and it all just go on like that)- The vocabulary( How many times has the word " shabby" been repeated?) is too monotonous - The dialogues are unreal - The chapters are too short
Thanks for your comments. I'm glad you checked it out basically the first two chapters are basically an essential introduction to the plot. the MC has been introduced yeah, he's the psycho guy and this chapter are to give you a insight of what he is and how he behaves and some surface story. it's only when you read on then will you get a clearer introduction of things ( that's how story works because I literally can't explain everything in the first two chapters or so) and grammar sorry I'm not too perfect in English grammar đ