Comments of chapter undefined of Mutation Frenzy

This chapter was quite engaging, and I appreciate the way you're developing Zen and Anna's characters. The tension and bullying they face in school make for a compelling conflict. Also, Zen's protective nature towards his family is a great character trait. The social media drama adds a modern twist to the story, and Zen's tweet was a bold move. It's interesting to see how the power dynamics play out in this world. The confrontation scene where Zen stands up for Anna is intense and showcases his determination to protect his family. It's a powerful moment. Just one suggestion: Consider a bit more descriptive language to help readers visualize the characters and settings even better. It can add depth to the story. Looking forward to the next chapter! Keep up the fantastic work! 😊📖👏

I loved it