Feniurme
The dawn has risen and the king has come.. The universe has knelt down and the humans have seen.. The sky has been colored and its light has gone.. My blood has covered every house of you and my name has been heard.. Your souls have heard my voice and my name has been imprinted on your hearts.. The dawn has come.. My suffering My life has begun.. My life is eternal.. My kingdom is one and only.. My life will not be forgotten.. My dawn has dawned.. My brothers have come.. My brothers have seen.. I have seen.. I am the strongest.. I am the greatest.. I am the King. In my name I say.. forget what is happening.. and bless me when I rise! Words were heard from the mouth of the young man who fell to the throne, and they were the last.. while a heavy and terrifying red light and a mighty and mighty smile filled his mouth.. then there was a light.. and then everything. i want this part that i gir from chat gpt to be in the story .. as i found it cool so plz put it in some fight or the idea of it
i’m kind of killed on this story because right now he has so many skills and powers i think he won’t ever reach a reality marble i think you missed out on him using it during that whole war arc. because as of right now i don’t see any enemy or scenario where he would feel so pressured and so underpowered where he would have to call upon a mystery that’s so close to true magic. personally i like the story but i think you’ve killed the possibility of a reality marble being used unless you do something so stupidly contrived it would actually ruin the chapter or chapters where that would come up. so while i like this story a lot it’s just sad seeing something that could be used as a huge motivator, a mortal reaching the realms of gods, not be used or it’ll used in a stupid scenario. i’ll keep reading but i hope if you do use UBW it won’t be over something dumb because he has so many powers and abilities and so many inventions and so many people around him to fight with and they can all use his amazing inventions i just can’t see any way he’ll reach a reality marble.