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Comments of chapter undefined of Multiversal: The Shop

Fetiche_de_albinas
Fetiche_de_albinasLv2Fetiche_de_albinas

you are a wizard harry

oobess
oobessLv4oobess

Thanks for the chapter. I hope he won't let his sister take away the humanity of his children. Red all over (at least leave it as he has)

Truck_kun2007
Truck_kun2007Lv4Truck_kun2007

Instead of complaining in a bit of an obtuse manner about the situation (like some ppl in paragraph comments), I offer some tangible improvements Author-san. I do think that most of the impact of his "submissiveness" is taken away now that he revelaed his power, but it would help if you could show some character development via a more assertive attitude. Either way, thx for the chapter

Gerier
GerierLv4Gerier

Whtvr
WhtvrLv5Whtvr

mc is god and he is pathetic. he fears his own mortal sister, pathetic

Lyrrad
LyrradLv5Lyrrad

Thanks for the Chapter~!

Luisz_Rodriguez
Luisz_RodriguezLv3Luisz_Rodriguez

CallmeCyrus0409
CallmeCyrus0409Lv4CallmeCyrus0409

This is a fic afterall, can't expect a consistent mc.

LeonToralla
LeonTorallaLv14LeonToralla

Thanks for new chapter more [img=Good night][img=update]

Regulus_Crematoa
Regulus_CrematoaLv1Regulus_Crematoa

I'm glad I was proven wrong about him revealing his Magician Status. I just wish he could be more assertive. He greatest wish is to live life to the fullest... yet he is being pushed around. Ironically, D is supportive of his desires, if only because it entertains her.

daniel_rahn
daniel_rahnLv2daniel_rahn

love it, Now i hope mc eventually reveal that to the whole magus comunity, after all a lot of them will try to kidnap Ai and the twins, It will be Better If mc Reveal himself as a User of the first true magic so the Fear for the bartholomei family Increase and most of magus wont try to mess with his childs

ImaginarySora
ImaginarySoraLv6ImaginarySora

Thanks for the chapter~! Looking forward  to the next one~

Shurasik
ShurasikLv5Shurasik

Thanks for the chapter

ForFunWorld
ForFunWorldLv13ForFunWorld

Thanks for the chapter

Dragon_Incarnation
Dragon_IncarnationLv5Dragon_Incarnation

He really loves to make chaos huh... Can't wait for him to tell them about the shop...

_Monarch
_MonarchLv14_Monarch

thanks for the chapter

YunZhiXue
YunZhiXueLv4YunZhiXue

Happy ending for Hoshino's Family (Ai & Childs)😊 Btw, mc hasn't childs from other girls again ? yet ???

Elysia_Husband
Elysia_HusbandLv4Elysia_Husband

thank you for the chapter

Jax_sama
Jax_samaLv4Jax_sama

Nig_er69
Nig_er69Lv1Nig_er69

Well that was a 5 minutes of.

Green_Monkey
Green_MonkeyLv4Green_Monkey

Thanks for the chapter