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Comments of chapter undefined of Multiversal: The Shop

Alex_Bull_Leandro
Alex_Bull_LeandroLv4Alex_Bull_Leandro

FAP_Master_
FAP_Master_Lv6FAP_Master_

where is my ai

Dao_of_Bonk
Dao_of_BonkLv4Dao_of_Bonk

Suggestions for next customer : Adam for Record of Ragnarok

Nyx_Celeste
Nyx_CelesteLv6Nyx_Celeste

I support the idea that Celestine should be invited to Alex's harem. The Elf Queen could work as an assistant in the shop. And author, ignore those mongrels who thinks this elf woman who's been raped is not worth it. This sub-humans are like stupid. They want pure maidens and impure to them are a no go. Talk about humility.

Pengamat_Ketiga
Pengamat_KetigaLv2Pengamat_Ketiga

I'd rather finish the plot with ai first and with a twin POV of some sort.... waiting is tiring

ToastedBoat
ToastedBoatLv3ToastedBoat

Be a sigma, ignore the big tiddy elf girl for Ai is all you need

Spectre_67
Spectre_67Lv4Spectre_67

Give me more of Ai Hoshino #Day2

MAO_Miaomiao
MAO_MiaomiaoLv1MAO_Miaomiao

I don't understand the purpose of all these now. author could have brought celestine before she was r*ped Huh Another author spoils his novel with strange things

Nyx_Celeste
Nyx_CelesteLv6Nyx_Celeste

Reign_Bloodark
Reign_BloodarkLv5Reign_Bloodark

Japanese and their fetish... While I do enjoy some non con these people really went ham overboard

Artoriapendraragon
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Tired_Regressor
Tired_RegressorLv3Tired_Regressor

Can the next customer/s be from the Mc's world? It would be cool if Hitori Gotoh or the reincarnated twins became customers.

Dfyz58869050
Dfyz58869050Lv2Dfyz58869050

kuroinu women are pathetic, but adding one of them to the harem is a sure way to lose most of the readers. MCs already have so many girls to deal with and a harem of more than 4 women is already abuse, and the logical limit of a harem with minimally good interaction is a harem with 7 women and then women should be madly in love with MCs.

WorldMonarch
WorldMonarchLv14WorldMonarch

I hope Celestine buy something to go back in time to prevent all the things that happened maybe even have mc help out in getting rid of all the black dogs or whatever they are called. oh and thanks for the chapter.

Random_Lazy_kid
Random_Lazy_kidLv3Random_Lazy_kid

Thanks for the chapter but pls pls pls make the chapter longer

Asfyr
AsfyrLv14Asfyr

We want more of Ai Hoshinoo, tthats he only thing that makes continue read this. Ur disposable harem sucks

Gerier
GerierLv4Gerier

DeadlyIg
DeadlyIgLv4DeadlyIg

Im fine with her being added to the harem but please do something like giving her a new body, considering the first true magic and the shop that shouldn't be difficult at all for him and would probably make her feel a lot better

Merlin58
Merlin58Lv2Merlin58

Thanks for chapter.I hope she's not in the harem.And for future customers, Record Ragnarok would be nice.

A_typical_guy
A_typical_guyLv3A_typical_guy

This is kinda awkward to read lol

Fahim_Shahriar
Fahim_ShahriarLv4Fahim_Shahriar

Author this is my third day i am going to plead you to have him buy the authority of balor aka his mystic eyes that actualizes death upon glare