Comments of chapter undefined of TWD: A New Beginning From the End of the World

many grammar errors and confused way people amd Mc talk to much smap of the full name the plot is weird...how he knew where he was so fast and how he found the main cast so fast too?? what is going on with his personality ?? But the worst is the grammar make your story seems like a translation

I’m gonna take a crack at it and assume English isn’t your native language. Some parts of this story’s grammar makes it super confusing to read. I was wondering why it seemed like you were able to churn out so many chapters so quick. Either you’re rushing, you have a bunch of stocked chapters that weren’t proofread, or this is a translation.

Dates like May 23 were invented or do they appear on the timeline? I thought it was late 2010 the apocalypse.

thanks for the really great chapter

I hope that if he goes to prison in this story, he can make it a decent base, in the original story the prison was very poorly used! With few improvements you can raise the prison's security level, such as deforesting the surrounding forest to increase visibility, using the wood to build a wooden wall and digging a pit around it, would raise the prison's security to a level much bigger!

Bro what a poor start to this novel. Rick and Shane talk like they're in the Medieval Age(I mean can u imagine Rick saying brew a beer?). MC just automatically knows he's in TWD world without any logical explanation. And grammar sometimes doesn't make sense at all. I suggest you rewrite this chapter Author because a lot of people would immediately drop this because of these reasons.

Thxs for the chap

Pretty much only one thing to do in his situation. Head for the hills. Then he can plot out a couple of places to loot after or during the fall. Figure out some mobility options. And befriend whoever is close enough to be considered his neighbors. His first priority being to find the mc is weird when zombie apocalypse is coming and he's in a highly populated place :/

Just take a loan like 500k-1m💰 then build underground shelter then your problem is now solved.

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter ! 😁 👍

Grammer needs a lot of work, especially the dialogue

thanks for the chapter

Gud